Malala Yousafazai

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http://www.kiwikidsnews.co.nz/opcw-win-nobel-peace-prize

WHO?	Malala Yousafzai
WHAT?	She has been nominated to win the nobel  prize
WHERE?	Malala is from pakistan but is living in the UK for now.
WHEN?	We'll find out when the results come out
WHY?	She was because she tried to promote education for the girls at pakistan.
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Headline:

Malala nominated for Nobel Peace Prize

Summary:

Pakistani Malala Yousafzai was nominated for the nobel peace prize. After she tried to promote education for the girls in the pakistan but then she got shot but that did not stop her in her tracks. She is currently living in the UK healing herself from her wound and is currently running an operation. The winners are announced at the end of october.

Opinion and Why: What do you think about this news and why

I was surprised when she got nominated at only a young age because the average age is 62. I think that she is a strong young lady and is very confident at trying to promote education in pakistan.

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Four Shot Movie Storyboard

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Thanksgiving

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On the first thanksgiving many of them played games sang songs but many of them could not eat in 1621. The first thanksgiving lasted for 3 days. Each year the President declares thanksgiving day.

Every year they will hold hands and say what they a greatful  for. I am grateful for my parents my family and everything.  

Many people today still celebrate Thanksgiving and I well known around the world.

Labour Day

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This morning we had 40 minutes to write about anything I wanted. From this we are going to set some goals for the term. Here i what I wrote.

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I glared at the ball as it flew through the air.

It was silent when I threw the ball. As the crowd stared anxiously waiting for the catch. He caught it the crowd screamed but there was the fullback chasing and caught him I ran as fast as I could. The ball was offloaded I got there just as the ball was going to touch the ground but somehow I caught it. Running to the 30 than the 20 and the 10  I dived in between the goal post.

It was was the best feeling ever when I got my first ever try. Then after the game we congratulated the other team so we celebrated with the other team.

I think that I have to work on my vocabulary and my punctuation. My goals are to try and get better at using my words and my punctuation. And my last goal is to try and make sense.
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