Thursday, May 19, 2011


As we slipped into the pool, I dived like a dolphin. Splashing and kicking to the other side of the pool, I choked on a lung full of water. Coughing, I blinked away the burn from my stinging red eyes .

1 comment:

  1. Jabez... I like how you used the metaphors like diving in like a dolphin and a lung full of water also many other cool things.COOL WRITING.


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