Thursday, October 18, 2012

My Holiday Fear

Facing my worst fear the fear fall. As I got on I gulped, my heart was rapidly beating. The ride started to move, I looked to the side my brother was shacking and trembling . I was breathless as the ride came to a end. I felt fearless. When I stood on my own two feet I almost fainted like a 100kg rock. But I stood up and felt like I could tackle any obstacle. So we went on another ride called the invader I stared at it and it just stared back with emptiness like it was lonely so I went on I felt like spewing.

So I decided that we would go home so we did we went and I played on my new ps3 I played all the time until I got bored of playing.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jabez
    I like your story about the ride that you went on it looks really SCARY love the way you put some cool words in your story. Keep up the good work.

    From Mao.


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