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Friday, March 14, 2014

Complex Sentences

Complex sentences – clauses and conjunctions.
Change each sentence according to the instructions.
Remember to use commas to mark the clauses and don’t be afraid to add adjectives, adverbs and powerful verbs!
  1. Add a verb opening to the beginning (add more action) and extend the sentence using so.
The cat sat on the mat so that meant that everybody would try and dodge the cat if they were walking past it.
  1. Add an adverb opening to the beginning (explains the action) and extend the sentence using as.
The man opened the door as his dog came sprinting towards him.
  1. Add extra information to explain the noun (using who, which that, whose) and extend using although.
The girl walked into the classroom although she had walked through the door the teacher already marked as absent .
  1. Add a time phrase to set the scene and extend using because.
Dad lit the fire because there was nothing around them accept for the trees and pitch black sky.
  1. Add a place phrase to set the scene and extend using when.
The football flew through the air when the goalkeeper hacked the ball away.
Here’s a tricky one!!
  1. Add an opening of your choice, extra information (who, which, whose and that) and extend using a conjunction of your choice.

The shark swam swiftly, but the fish was to fast for him

Wednesday, March 12, 2014

Divison in Parts Strategy

How to Hit the Ball & How to run the base

First of all you have to have a good stance before you hit the ball so the best option is to bend your knees to a 45 degree angle and put the bat just above your shoulder and then you have a really good stance and you are ready to hit the ball. Baseball was originally born in New York City and then it grew bigger and bigger. But it was most popular in America because the sport was home grown. Now if the pitcher can pitch really fast it is a better option to hit it as far as possible. You gotta watch the pitcher do a few practise throws so you know how he pitches.  

So when the ball travels towards you it is best if you would hit the ball near the tip of the bat or also called the sweet spot. If you hit it just right you could whack the ball out into space and back again. Now all you need left is running the diamond before the ball gets  to the base keeper. When you sprint towards the first base before getting to it you have to move your hips so you can turn touch the base and run off to the next.

So it means that before you get to a base you would have to swerve your hips before getting there. Moving your hips to a 40 degree angle is probably one of the best options before getting to the first base. But when you run towards the second base you have to turn your hips earlier than the first because you might have built up speed. So if you were running towards third base you would do exactly the same thing that you did for base one. Finally for the last for the last you don’t have to swerve or anything the last base is about speed and getting there before the fielders throw the ball at the backstop.



Hopefully that will help you with hitting a lot of home runs in your baseball games and help you with running the bases.

Wednesday, March 5, 2014

Bro Army Partnership

This is our Partnership Movie

FANBOYS

FANBOYS is a aronym that is mostly used for simple sentences but not complex.
 F: For
A: And
N: Nor              
B: But
O: Or
Y: Yet
S: So
 It also makes your writing just a bit more interesting. You can use it for compound sentences so that means if you write a sentence and then use one of these words from FANBOYS and add another sentence. So a compound is a sentence joind togethe by one of these words.

Tuesday, March 4, 2014

Maths DLO

This is my maths DLO , WALT use the strategy 'Division in Parts' with larger numbers.

Jabez Crane Story Differences

  
                                            TSURU ONGAESHI STORY DIFFERENCES

The two stories have kind of a same feeling about it but it is not quite the same because they have different ways of starting the story. On the paper version the book is about a old couple who lived far away and on the online version it started about the bird falling out of the sky and landing in front of a farmers son. Although they have many differences there's also one thing that's is the same. They both talk about how the crane pays them back for help the bird fly off into the mountains.